@Jeremiahbrown Hey thanks for the feedback, this is really helpful! I'm just starting to learn anatomy so I will definitely take what you have taught me and apply it. Appreciate it!

@carlianne This is great feed back and a wonderful tip on how to get the lines just right. I struggled with the same thing in my drawing but couldn't figure out how to correct it. Thanks for the clear explanation.

@ambria Awesome start on tackling perspective. Hope you kept at it over the last couples months (as I am now just getting into the forums).

Thank you all. I really appreciate your comments!

The main thing that bothers me is I don't know why this is all going on, if theres any reason at all. If its supposed to crazy and wacky then the bone chaser and the flying bone are very surreal but then the landscape isn't as crazy.

As for the technical qualities, the composition is too balanced I feel. And the bone chaser is right in the middle of the page, so we are missing out on the action of the chase. I also don't read the wings on the bone as wings immediately, rather more as a bow.